Yawn, just finished hitting my new word count goal. I was tremendously bored by the end and realized there wasn’t an ounce of conflict. I tried to add some, but decided “Who cares” about what happens to them today? The nerve of these characters. Here I devote my entire, and might I add very rare, 2 free hours to them and what do they do? Just stand in a field and plant a garden for the war effort. Stilted dialogue, average adjectives. Some people, I mean characters!